Saturday, November 3, 2012

Desde sempre e para sempre Chapter 1

Desde sempre e para sempre


Chapter 1

    A tall young man in a dark suit was standing by the glass wall which gave him a magnificent view of the East River.  The United Nations was smack in the middle and as he looked down and made out the tiny dots of people making their way out of the building, he realized that another day was over at the UN. He smirked. Bunch of diplomatic acrobats of a circus who thought they were saving the world. Little did they know that they lived in a world that only stretched as far as the UN Headquarters. Outside was a whole new world, the real world, where people didn't talk in the third person and where people were much more than the delegate of Brazil and the delegate of India…

It was a ritual. Every time he was in Manhattan, no matter what, he would stand by his window with his whiskey tumbler at 6:30 pm and watch the delegates pour out of the UN HQ. It was precisely why he had bought the entire 75th floor on the Chrysler building which overlooked the East River and the United Nations.

 

His ritual complete, he chugged the remnants of his drink and put the whiskey tumbler back on the elaborate bar table in his cabin. The sun had already set and the night life in Manhattan had begun. But for Gael Breno Bourgeois, it was the second morning of his day. While he wrapped up business in the West for the day, the East had woken up.

There was a knock on the door.

Gael: “Come in, John.”
John: “Sir, I have your brother on the private line. I know you asked me not to disturb you but he says it’s urgent…”

Gael nodded and dismissed him.
He switched over to his Bluetooth and once again stood facing the glass wall. However, this time he was facing the south and the entire tip of Manhattan lay before him.

Gael: “Davi. Oi! e aí?”
Davi: “Irmão, she is asking for you.” 

Gael was silent for a couple of seconds. He knew what that meant.

Gael: “How long does she have?”
Davi: “The Doc says two weeks, max.”
Gael: “I am on my way. Tchau!”
Davi: “Tchau!”

Gael: “JOHN!”
John scrambled in: “Yes Sir!”
Gael: “Get my Chopper ready. I am leaving for the airport in 5 minutes. Make sure my jet is ready to take off the moment I reach the airport.”
John: “Yes Sir! Right away…”

Gael went back and stood by the window facing the UN. He sighed and put his coat on. It was December and it had begun to snow. It was going to be Christmas in two weeks. He picked up his briefcase and his cell phone and walked out of his cabin.

Why did she wear a saree?! She was not in Mumbai and people on the street were definitely not going to burst out into a song and dance! Not that it happened in Mumbai but she liked to think it did. It had started to snow and the bottom opening of the saree allowed the cold air to freeze her bottom. She shivered and opened her Hot Pink umbrella which would stand out even to anyone who was looking at the UN from say the Chrysler Building! It was a norm to wear the dark and boring colors at the UN especially during winter. Black coats and black winter jackets, black umbrellas and black scarves….but no. Naina Malhotra, she liked her colors, it kept her happy.

Naina: “NAINA MALHOTRA!!! NEXT TIME IF YOU DECIDE TO WEAR A SAREE WHEN IT IS SNOWING OUTSIDE, I WILL KILL YOU!”

She knew she looked like a clown. Her red winter coat and a pink and white saree hardly matched. But she had packed everything else and she had NOT expected it to snow!

Naina: “TAXI!!!! WHAT…..”

The taxi passed her and stopped in front of another lady. The delegate of Venezuela with her form fitting coat which showed off her voluptuous body had managed to snag the taxi even though Naina had been the first one to call for it!

Naina: “FINE! FINE! NEW YORK TAXI BHAIYYA! I WILL WALK! I DON’T NEED YOU!”

Naina sighed. Why did she even bother? It’s not like he could hear her and she was making a fool of herself. But she was cold and that’s what it did to her. It made her upset. She pulled her coat tight and started walking to her apartment. It was only a couple of blocks away….

Gael was flicking through his emails as he made his way to the Helipad. The moment he walked through the office passages everyone stood up to greet him. But he didn't even bother. His entourage was behind him wheeling his luggage and files that he had decided to carry with him. He never looked up from his mobile as he walked by; the people around him didn't exist.

Naina: “Good Evening, Om Prakash ji!”
Om Prakash: “Good Evening, Naina Bitia! I am going to miss you, you know!”
Naina: “It’s just two weeks! I will be back to the UN and the Mission in two weeks! Don’t worry, I am sure you need a break from me!”
Om Prakash laughed: “I won’t be here in the morning as my shift will be done in a couple of hours. So, you have a safe flight and relax! It’s your vacation, have fun, okay?”

Naina leaned over the doorman’s desk and hugged the elderly man.

Naina: “Thank you, Om Prakash ji! You know I love you! I will try my best to rest! Convey me regards to Auntyji and don’t worry I have not forgotten about her shopping list!”

Gael got in his helicopter and put his headset on. He then resumed working on his emails.

As soon as Naina got into her apartment, she turned her music system on. She ripped her coat off and literally went around the room in circles as she pulled her saree out. She, herself, found it so silly that she burst out laughing. When the saree was off, she had to hold onto a chair to steady herself. The room continued to spin around her! She then quickly put on some pajamas and a tank top and ran to the window seat, her most favorite place in the house. She made herself comfortable and hugged her knees. It looked so beautiful outside. The snowflakes looked and felt magical now that she was warm inside her house. Her window faced the Chrysler building and she saw a helicopter take off into the wind.  

She reached for her diary and opened it. Her pink diary with her pink gel pen.

Life is but a hazy mist, 
Sometimes snowflakes and sometimes a twist,
Not without a gist but without a list.

Once you conquer note it down, if you fail, you won’t frown.
No, don’t take it to be sans passion,
Arduous hope and fleeting compassion.

Don’t write your destiny to stop you from falling
To make it happen is your true calling…

She closed her diary and hugged it. She giggled as Kuch Kuch Hota Hai started playing on her music player. She stood up and started dancing with an imaginary partner...



She had Kajol's dance moves memorized down pat. Her long wavy hair cascading over her shoulders and twirling around with her as she swayed to the music. She closed her eyes and shivered imagining a seductive kiss by her imaginary partner. Not Shah Rukh Khan but a tall dark man....She picked up her red scarf and twirled it around in the air imagining herself in the gazebo with her one and only. She went into an emotional overdrive imagining an engagement ring on her finger...if only she could run into the forest and into Salman Khan's arms!! He would do too! She bit her lip laughing at herself. 

Life is perhaps a fleeting moment,
One that doesn't embrace innocence.
Mistakes are made but lessons aren't learned,
Forgiveness? Is that only a relative term?

John: "Sir, the pilot says that we should be in Rio in about 8 hours. Would you like me to have the air hostess serve you dinner?"

Gael closed his book. Putting his pen back into his breast pocket, he looked up. 

Gael: "No. And turn off the music. I want absolute silence."

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Naina on the phone: "Dadi, I fly tomorrow night....make sure Ramu Chacha's taxi is working fine. We don't want to have a repeat of the last time...And have you made your special Chicken Biryani? I like it when it is a day old....I know you know!...But don't forget Sev Puri!...Yes, Dadi! I am going to heat up my dinner now....What am I having for dinner? Don't ask...But don't worry, in just a couple of hours my life is going to change!..Yes, of course I am talking about food!...Dadi, do you have any new boyfriends?....hahahaha....no boyfriend for me but if you want I can kidnap one of the goras for you and bring him home with me...Me? Goras are so dull! They don't have enough garam masala in them! How can I live with him if he can't even go beyond two spoons of your famous spicy Biryani?...Dadi, now I think I have sufficiently tortured myself by talking about all your yummy food. So, I am going to say good night and I will see you day after tomorrow! Love you sooo much Dadi!"

Naina heated a bowl of the leftover Pad Thai and went back to her window seat. Winter in New York was magical but she would choose Mumbai over New York any day! She was finally going back home! It had been two years, two long years...

She had fulfilled her parent’s wishes when she had cleared the UPSC exams and successfully enrolled into the Indian Foreign Services. Her parents had always wanted her to be an Indian Foreign Service Officer. Her father and her grandfather had been one. As an only child, she had continued the family tradition. She had lost her parents in a car crash while she was still in school . Her grandfather too had passed away five years ago. It had been difficult but she hadn't been alone. Her grandmother, a strong woman, had taken care of her and supported her all along.

When she got her first posting to New York, she had wanted her Dadi to come along with her. However, her Dadi had chosen to stay back home with her people, her community. She was a social worker and made everyone’s business her business. She could be annoying but everyone knew she meant well. She was the one person they knew they could always count on.

Naina yawned and got up to make her way to the bed. Tomorrow was going to be a busy day. She had to take care of a couple things before she left. Fortunately, her flight was in the night, so she had enough time to get all her things done just as she had planned.

Gael had not managed to sleep the whole flight. He was worried. She meant the world to him. They had just landed and Gael was waiting for his jet to stop cruising and reach the ramp. His helicopter was waiting for him which would take him straight home.

John: “Sir.”

Gael got up and left the jet. Within a few seconds his helicopter was up in the air and he was on his way home. He looked to his right and saw the majestic statue of Cristo Redentor welcoming him home…











The Copacabana Beach, the white sand and the crescent beach smiling like the crescent moon; a precious place where he had taught his brothers how to swim while she prepared the picnic for them on the beach every Sunday...











The Sugarloaf Mountain where he had been with his brothers for a series of outdoor trekking and climbing trips; majestic and glorious as usual where she had been there to pick the boys up and clean their wounds every time they had fallen down. The sailing expeditions the three musketeers embarked upon knowing that she would be there waiting for them at home...












Crystal clear water, clear breeze, joy of a family, love, belonging, truth, lies, betrayal, death, redemption, freedom, wealth, duty, destiny…

This was his city, Rio de Janeiro. The January River which had given them all a new beginning. He took a deep breath. He was home.











Leo ran to him and hugged him.

Leo: “Irmão…Aaji…”

An elderly lady dressed impeccably in a red pantsuit walked over to him.

Gael: “Mãe…”
Mãe: “She knows you are here.”

Gael hugged his brother: “Leo, its time. We knew this was coming… Davi?”
Leo: “Inside. She has been asking for you.”

They all entered the room.

An old lady on her bed was trying to sit up as a tall young man was helping her and at the same time reprimanding her for doing so.

"Davi, don't forget no matter how tall you grow, I will still whack you on your buttocks!"

Gael: "He is only trying to take care of you. Something you don't think we or this country is capable of doing anymore."

“I was wondering whether I would have to come outside to see you. Confrontation is not one of your best abilities.”

Confronting her... 

Gael ran to her and kneeled before her.
Gael: “Aaji…”
Aaji: “I am still alive and I am not going anywhere until you fulfill your promise…”

Dr. Martinez: “I strongly suggest against travelling in this condition…”

Gael raised his hand and silenced the doctor.

Gael: “John.”

John: “Yes, Sir.”

Gael: “Get the plane ready. We are going to Mumbai.”
Aaji: “Not your jet, Mr. Bourgeois. Before I bid my final adieu, I want to experience life the way I remember it. We came here in an economy class, it was Air India I remember. We will go back in Air India, economy class. I am tired of the privileges you have given me.”

Davi: “I am coming too.”
Leo: “Me too.”

Mãe: “Leo! Copa Mundial Finale is day after tomorrow! It is your duty toward your country! Davi, your movie premier…”


Davi: “Mãe! Aaji means the world to us…it is okay if I don’t show up to click some pictures on the red carpet!”

Aaji: “My filhos! I am not going anywhere! Leo, I want you to win that World Cup for Brazil and come to meet me. Davi, my superstar, I want you to come with your twin. Remember what I taught you, a commitment is a commitment. The show must always go on…”

Leo and Davi kneeled down before her next to Gael.
Leo: “We know Gael is more....”
Davi: “But we love you just as much…”

Gael stood up and left the room.

Aaji: “I love all three of you equally. I just worry about Gael ...he is still broken.”
Leo: “Don’t go, Aaji!”
Aaji: “You are going to be there too in a few days!”
Leo: “NO! DON’T LEAVE US AT ALL!”

Mãe ran to her and hugged her, bursting into tears.
Mãe: “YOU are their mother! How am I going to…”

Aaji: “You have been the perfect mother to all three of them. I am sure you will do just fine. It is time for me to go. I have outstayed my welcome here in Rio. It is time I go back home, back to my people.”

Davi: “And we are not your people?”
Leo: “Have we not loved you enough?”
Mãe: “Has Rio disappointed you?”

Aaji laughed: “Rio has given me all that I could have asked for and much more. YOU…each one of you have been my family, my only family…but I know my soul will not rest in peace if I am not back home…please…”

Gael was standing by the fireplace in the living room. The Bourgeois Palace, an eclectic castle, the majestic conical roofs, the splendid gardens all in the middle of the city provided a glimpse of the true Bourgeois history and heritage. The castle was decorated for Christmas. 





A 25 ft tall Christmas tree decorated with real gold, silver and diamond ornaments was right next to the fireplace. Gael traced his hand along the mantle, taking in all the photos of him and his brothers as they grew up together in Rio. The last one was the very first one. This one was with just him and his Aaji in Mumbai...


Mãe: "It is okay to let your guard down sometimes, filho."
Gael: "No, its not."

Gael: "John!"

John ran into the living room.

Gael: "The itinerary?"
John: "Sir, there is a problem. Air India does not operate flights between Rio and Mumbai. We will have to fly to New York..."
Gael: "Whatever. We can take my jet to New York and then Aaji can get her fill of Air India from New York to Mumbai."
John: "There are only two flights that go to Mumbai per day, Sir. We won't make it in time for the morning one but the one in the night..."
Gael: "Reschedule the second flight."
John: "Sir, we won't have to. We should reach New York with ample of time to spare until the evening flight to Mumbai."
Gael: "We leave for New York in an hour. We should be there by 3 pm. I want the Air India flight to leave for Mumbai by 4 pm."
John: "But Sir, its scheduled for 10 pm. We can postpone a flight but we can hardly..."
Gael: "I am sorry, I didn't know this was a discussion. Now if that's all..."

Gael stalked out of the living room. 

John turned around his head spinning. He had the worst job in the world even though his paychecks were meant for a King. On his way out he bumped into Davi. 

Davi: "Tough night, John?"
John: "Oh its just like any other day with the Boss."
Davi smiled: "Offer to compensate the passengers with the flight fare who can make it by 4 pm and those who can't, offer them double the fare and make sure they are on the next flight to Mumbai."
John: "Thank you! But do you think Sir wouldn't mind..."
Davi: "He has too much money lying around. He wouldn't notice."

Leo walked in: "He would definitely notice. But then I am sure he will email you to do just that in a couple of minutes when he has cooled down..."

John's phone buzzed with an email from the Boss. 

John looked at the identical twins, Davi and Leo, before him: "As you said...The Bourgeois clan sure is something!"

The next day:


Naina: “He…hello? Yes, speaking…yes…WHAT? WAIT! How can you do that? It was scheduled for 10 pm! Why?....What do you mean you can’t tell me!.....NO! I don’t want your money! I want to know who is responsible for this! Please, put me through to the manager!”

After waiting for a while and losing her cool all over again…

Naina: “Hello! What is this about?! The flight was scheduled for 10 pm and now you are telling me that it departs at 4 pm?! No, you are not just causing me inconvenience….No, I cannot wait for the next flight! Keep your money and shove it up your…”

Naina disconnected the phone and groaned. So much for being the sophisticated diplomat! She had woken up to this call having slept through her alarm and oh no! She had so much to do!
This had already turned out to be a bad start! Was it a sign? Was she not supposed to board that plane?
Naina knew that in her profession she had to board a million planes but it did nothing to alleviate her fear of flying…

She splashed cold water on her face. Dadi’s chicken biryani; that was all she was going to think about.

Naina ran about the room tossing things into her suitcase. This was just how she was. It was not like she would have done a better job had the flight departed on time. She had wanted to go to the parlor before she left but now that was out of the question. She looked at herself in the mirror. It wasn't that bad…besides, it wasn't like she was going to meet her Prince Charming on Flight AI 101!

If the flight left at 4 pm, she needed to be there by 1 pm. It would take her 2 hours to get there. She had to stop on her way and say goodbye to her girls at the dance academy. Naina looked at the watch. She should have left an hour ago!

She quickly sat on the bag to shut it. Both of them, one after the other. She knew it was overweight. It had to be! She was Indian!  She called her driver to get the car ready and jumped into the shower.

Naina Malhotra always made it a point to wear a great outfit while flying. If it was the last outfit she was ever going to wear before the plane crashed and killed them all, then it might as well be a great one.

She wore beige pants and a white top with a gold belt. She tucked her figure-hugging top into the pants and left the top few buttons undone. She had big, long and brown hair which curled at the bottom. The bed hair suited her. Her hair was so big it would take her hours to do anything with it anyways. She decided to leave it open and put some chunky gold earrings on. She LOVED bangles and made it a point to wear them everyday. Today, she put on a set of colorful bangles with patterns of gold on them. She then grabbed her brown handbag and dumped all her important papers and passport she needed, including her phone, into her handbag and started searching for her shoes.

Where was the other one?? 

She found the other nude heel pump under her dresser, put it on and finally left her home. Her suitcases were heavy, she couldn't even lift them herself! Dammit…she would deal with it at the airport.

Gael, on the other hand, was well on his way to New York and cherishing his 64 year old Macallan Single Malt Whiskey on his private jet. His Aaji was sleeping comfortably in one of the bedrooms.

Gael: “John, as soon as you reach Mumbai make sure all her medicines and you know the doctors and a nurse, make that three nurses, are waiting for her in the suite…where are we staying?”

John: “I booked the Tata Suite at Taj…”

Gael took a sip of his whiskey: “Don’t they have a Maratha suite?”

John: “I think so but it is a bit…”

Gael: “A bit what?”

John: “It’s only Rs. 2 Lakh per night. I am guessing it is less equipped…The Tata Suite is the best they have and that too is just Rs. 7 Lakh per night, nothing by your standards, Sir. But that is the closest...”

Gael looked at John and smiled.

Gael: “The Maratha Suite will be more appealing to her than the Tata Suite irrespective of its tariff and I mean no offense to the honorable Tatas…”

John: “I am extremely sorry, Sir. I will make the changes as soon as I get there. I should have asked you before but I thought…”

Gael: “Relax! Leo is right. You are way too uptight.”

He poured a glass of whiskey for John: “Here, it will help take the edge off. We will be there in a few hours. Take some rest and I am sure you will do your job well when we get there. After all, I hire only the best.”

Gael stood up and entered his room. John loosened his tie and sighed. Sometimes Gael was pissed off, sometimes he was indifferent and sometimes he was impatient…regardless John was always sweating in his presence because Gael was never...what was the word…“nice!” John took a good sip of the whiskey, the most expensive whiskey in the world and he would be a fool to not taste it. It was priceless! He smiled and set about to work. 

Relax? One does not simply relax if one is working for the great Gael Breno Bourgeois. He knew people would kill for his job, for the experience, guidance and training he was receiving under the Nobel Prize winner in Economic Sciences. Invested in one of the most cut throat as well as insensitive fields of business, Gael Breno Bourgeois was a living legend. And John was grateful to him for had it not been for Gael, John would have…he shook his head and opened his file. John was not one to drown in his past for it was worthless. 







115 comments:

  1. Observer says:


    HARE KRISHNA, HARE KRISHNA,
    KRISHNA KRISHNA HARE HARE
    HARE RAMA, HARE RAMA,
    RAMA RAMA HARE HARE!!

    My dearest Charmingsagi,

    This is my first comment on your fantastic looking blog and I could not help paying my obeisances to the Lord for many reasons!

    Some being : for giving you the talent for this, opportunity for this, intention for this, for without His blessing, can even a tiny blade of grass move?? Huh??

    And then there is that good fortune which has made me know you and for being able to read you and lose myself in the gullies of your imagination!!

    And then, that is also my prayer to the Lord for keeping you happy and capable at all times, to fill your life with success and prosperity and good cheer, to hold your hand by every little flux in your life and lead you securely and wisely in your life!!

    Many, many things, Sagi!! Some cannot even be written here, for what all can be written in a comment box?? Is it possible to put every one of our heart's feelings in mundane words and present and exhibit it casually in the face of the world??

    Charmingsagi, your first update and here I am taking a deep breath!! B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L., P.R.O.M.I.S.I.N.G. and I.N.V.I.T.I.N.G. into your world of words!!

    Having read three stories of yours already, I have never hidden my appreciation for your calibre and I can confidently say keeping all my experience in mind that this one is going to be bigger - much, much, bigger and more intelligent and deeper than ever before, (honestly speaking), if there can be any improvement possible at all, if you haven't already attained the greatest heights in terms of art and thought and feeling and presentation in your earlier stories!!

    God bless you, may Ganapathi Bappa take away all obstacles from your path and make it beautiful and enjoyable, for we both know - it is not just the ends, but the means that counts ultimately. For should our journey not be a great experience for us to enjoy our destination??

    I love you very deeply and wish you the greatest success in all your endeavours and everlasting joy in your life!! YASHASVI BHAVA, SUKHI BHAVA!! This is the blessing I give my son and every young person I meet - BE SUCCESSFUL, BE HAPPY!

    Must I spell it out that you have already charmed your way into my heart!! I just want to hold you there and keep you with me there. Always. Because you are really precious.

    God bless,
    Observer

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  2. Wow! By the looks of it, sounds very promising! I already want to know what will happen next and how will they meet. You have immense cllibre and a blog such as this will surely potray it! It will do justice to your amazing writing skills. The magics that you weave, and your characters are so realistic, I could imagine each and every move of naina, myself being a big Karol fan... Of a time.... Do continue,cause I am eagerly waiting!

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    1. Thank you! Just a dash of change to our life! How will they meet? It will be exciting, at least I hope, but I haven't planned that out yet! Yes, I am full of excitement with all the character freedom I have! It is a huge relief that I dont have to follow the mould of Arnav and Khushi that has been set by the CVs. It is liberating! Sister, you are a fellow Kajol fan, too! That is awesome! Thank you once again!

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    2. Hey charms! I am sure, their confrontation will be amazing! I am sure it is, now that you have Gael and Naina, you can design their character in a way which you want, with now boundaries! It will be fun to see, how these contradicting characters meet!

      Secondly, I have some bad new, well more for myself than you! Due to some family problems and restrictions I am prohibited to come on myeduniya ever again, which means I cannot read your fantastic YNNA! And belive me, when I say it, It was by far the best one I have read so far! I will miss going there and specially reading your story there! Wish that RK and Madhu will soon be together and Khushi and Arnav remain tight as they are. Will really miss to know the end! Love you, though I hope to be in touch through this story!

      Aneesha
      Xoxox

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    3. I will be eventually posting the story here once I complete it. So dont worry. You will definitely have the chance to read it. I hope everything is alright.

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    4. Hi again!

      Wow! I am very happy to know that I will get a chance to finish your story! Thank you, and everything is very much fine here... It was just a few things solved now, but still... Anyways, an amazing update! Our Gael babu, is no less than ASR. Can I request for a picture of bith Gael and Naina? I really like that name anyways... So the D- Day will be held in Mumbai... Hm.. Looking forward to it! I can totally feel Naina's excitement! Her conversation was SK simple yet to real. It really described a day to day, Indian girl living abroad. Oh, I am so happy for Naina, reason being, even I na flying off to Inida, though not Mumbai, for a holiday!! I am so excited, to have all the chats, and jalebi and methais. Looking forward to it. Anyways, just a clarification, is aaji an old character? I seem t like her, as of now that is.

      Luv u!,
      Hope to read more soon!

      Aneesha
      Xoxoxoxo

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    5. Hi Aneesha,

      Yes, Aaji means grandmother in Marathi. She is a Mumbaikar. Are you still in India? How was your break?? Where did you go? Now you also have a pic for Gael and Naina, I hope it works for you! Did you get a chance to eat plenty Jalebees??

      Cheers,
      Charms

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  3. Charms, this was absolutely wonderful! Can't wait for your next installment!! The characters of Naina and Gael, so different, and yet meant to be together ... wonderful!

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    1. Thank you! You are going to have to wait longer. I want to make this story special so I am going to take my time with it. But meanwhile you have YNNA to hang out with!

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  4. hey charms!!! rose7 here, wow! just wow! as i have said it earlier, u are gifted! and u use the gift well enough! as i have read all your stories, i know how well you write about some perticular characters of TV., and i have seen your imagination as well! i love your creation! and coming to your this story, i must say a great job! well done dear! loved it! just loved your potrayal of the characters, very realistic and logical. waiting for you to write fast. don't make me wait for a long time!!! <3

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    1. So your name is Asmita, what does it mean? Its a lovely name! Thank you! Thank you for having so much faith in me! Hahaha! Sorry but you are going to have to be a bit patient with this story. I am going to take my time with it. But you have YNNA until then! I just wanted to introduce Gael and Naina for now...the story will move forward soon...stay tuned...

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    2. yup, i m asmita, n it means pride and identity....and thank you!and take your time dear, because i know u r gonna come up with an interesting turns in ur this story...thank you.

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    3. Beautiful name, beautiful meaning! I am definitely taking my time with this one. Thanks for understanding

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  5. wow..wow..wow..its wonderful ...i don`t don`t even have words to praise ur story..wat a story i just loved it and the charecters r super but still i imagine of arshi near Gael and naina and ur creation is super.........plz update same story in myeduniya in the name of arshi .............just copy it and paste plz

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    1. Thank you! Hmm you should read my message at the top of Update 97 about Gael & Naina as Arnav and Khushi! But if it works for you go for it! I want you to have fun while you are reading my story! I wont be uploading the story on myeduniya because it is not an Arshi story. And I want to keep it that way. Gael and Naina are mine as Arnav and Khushi belong to 4 Lions...I hope you understand.

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  6. charming charming wat can i say... i still see naina as khushi and Gael as arnav.. its gonna take a long time to get into these characters but fantastic start.. love it already.. wish u update in bulks... :P love ya..
    PS:blog looks cool..

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    1. Haha! The pleasure is all mine! You should read my message at the beginning of YNNA Update 97 about Gael and Naina as Arnav and Khushi. But if it floats your boat, go for it, as long as you have fun! I know it is gonna take long time but thank you for giving them a shot. Love you!

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  7. I can't believe that how could you write so good! Wonderful start and please tell me the meaning of the title. I also have created a blog. See:http://anushreej.blogspot.in/ And comment if you like. This was something which I can never forget! Congrats for such talent!:)

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    1. Wow! Thank you! Believe it because it is really not that great!! Haha! Please, itna mat chadao! I checked your blog out and I wanted to talk to you about it...can you give me your email id if you dont mind? I wanted to share my thoughts with you :)

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    2. Arey ab tumhe na chadayein toh kya karein? You deserve it! Reminds me of A Walk To Remember. Beautiful! And yeah my e-mail id is:onutaani@gmail.com but if it doesn't work, you can always take jain.silky31@gmail.com Thanks! And go on!

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  8. ... And, Ladies and Gentlemen, we have another block-buster in the house. Gael has already stolen my heart, actually what was left of it after Salman(haaaaaaayyeee)had stolen it! The secret of happiness: Your story + chocolate cake. Aaaaah!

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    1. CHOCOLATE CAKE!!!

      Thank you!!! Picture toh abhi shuru huyi hai! Gael ne toh kuch kiya bhi nahi hai! Usse toh abhi bahut kuch karna hai! Salman on the other hand, I think he was made for you! I am telling you!

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  9. Sagi,

    For some reason I am not able to post my comments on eduniya. Another mind blowing update of YNNA and I am sad that it will come to an end. But am happy you are starting this blogspot. Count on me to be with you through this journey as well.

    Riya

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    1. Hi! Your posting comments problem at MED is fixed as you were able to post a comment today, so yeah! Thank you for joining me on this journey! Love you!

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  10. Wow Sagi...i dont know what else to say....you have it in you...the way with your stories....you just bring a difference to the charecters..in MD i had loved the style you wove into your charecters a style of your own and some charecters of your own....they have difference from the original which is much more lovely ....so love you loads ...

    Now something which i was looking forward to a story of your own ...naina and Gael i am so looking forward to this .. just like i wait to read your updates in MD ..i just came across it by accident ,i mean IPKKND i never watch serials not a big fan actually but i had started watchin Geet with my cos whn i stayed with her for hol ,so while i watched the last eps of it in YT someone mention abt IPKKND in comments and i watched the Diwali eps and got hooked and from there came to MD by cance and am thankful coz now i get to read your story...i will not bore you with my story coz i cant wait to read yours ...all the best to you for the blog...wish you all sucess with your story..:)

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    1. Wow! I am really overwhelmed reading your comments! Wow thank you! I am really glad that my work touched you. Thank you. It means a lot! Yes! Finally a story of my own! It is so liberating to have characters of my own, to make them what I want to and I dont have to worry about following a mould which has been cast by someone else!

      It was very interesting to read how you were introduced to my story. You are not boring me! I am glad that you watched the show with your sister and get hooked later on because now I have a cherished friend and reader for my stories.

      Thank you!

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  11. Hey dominator here...I must say that only one chapter in and I am already hooked. I wanna know what happens next...whats the background of these characters...why Gael is so hurriedly returning to Rio...how the two will meet etc. Can't wait to read more :)

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    1. So you are Kinza. What a unique name! What does it mean? I have never heard it before! Only one chapter and you are hooked!? WOW! I am shocked, I really am! Stay tuned is all I can say! I am glad you are reading me!

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    2. yup that's me :) Kinza means hidden treasure. It also means intelligent ( I hope I live upto that meaning) and I have been hooked since DKDD not this. I just love your style and therefore am interested to read a story that is totally yours. Looking forward to yet another beautiful story.

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    3. Wow! That is amazing! Is it in Urdu? I am sure you live up to that meaning! Thanks for the patience with this one!

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    4. to answer the last question...it is both urdu and arab...ok and now for the update...I loved it! I have to say you create such specific characters that before I even saw the picture of Preity Zinta, I Had her in my mind as Naina...Idk y...maybe it was cuz she was naina in Kal ho naa ho but she was the face in my mind when reading this...n now for Gael...Hrithik...I love you for that as he is the person I would imagine with that sort of personality and yup he cud pass for Brazilian! I totally agree because he looks very exotic...not very desi. I mean if people can say I look Puerto Rican, then he can most definitely be Brazilian

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    5. Perfect! I am so glad you could think of Preity! Great minds think alike??! Haha! I like to think so! Yes, he does and to be honest, I know a Brazilian who is the inspiration for Gael and he resembles Hrithik Roshan. He resembles the actor so much, it is mind boggling....and amazing because I have my personal Hrithik Roshan!

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  12. Wow, Charms! I am truly charmed by your story! But when has your story not charmed me? The story of Gael ( unique name!) and Naina is sure to soon keep us awake! The beginning looks promising and brilliant, I can already visualize the mind-blowing chemistry and the explosive way of their first meeting! Looking forward to the updates! Brilliant!

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    1. Dhanyavad!

      Trust me, the pleasure is all mine! Gael is a unique name and I have a friend with that name. It sounds amazing (Guy -yell) and I fell in love with it ever since I heard it for the first time. The moment I decided that the character was going to be Brazilian, I knew his name had to be Gael. Yes there shall be explosions and fun! Lots of fun!! Thank you for taking the time to read me!

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  13. Hey charms,

    Congrats on ur new story!!!! You surprise me with ur every story.... How can one person be good at humor, emotional and romantic journos.... You are a all in all a paisa wasool writer... U can give chetan bhagat run for his money any day.... I know u will publish ur own book some day and i wish you all the very best!!!!

    BTW which salman khan were you refering to in ur story ;) I hope its Dr Khan ;)

    Love,
    Preethika

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    1. Thank you! HAHAHA! What can I say! Atom bomb hai hum! Paisa Wasool that is ekdum jhatak! Love it! Chetan Bhagat? really? Hmmmmmm ab toh kitab publish karni hi padegi! Thank you so much! Trust me when that day comes, I will personally inform you!

      Nooo YNNA's Salman Khan is fiction! Naina was referring to the real one!! Because he was in Kuch Kuch Hota Hain too! Remember, Kajo runs into the forest and meets him there after the gazebo dance with SRK?

      Love you!

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  14. Hey,

    It's Shazia Virman from Myeduniya and as always you have blown me away with your brilliant story!! It's an amazing start and I am dying to know what happens next! I have already fallen in love with the unique characters and the simply amazing descriptions of the places. Each and every single detail you put into the update just makes the story a thousand times better. I have to tell you that you are one of the most amazing writers I have ever come across and I insist that you make your talent into a profession. The story is fantastic, I love the bits and crumbs of bollywood put into your story, it just make me enjoy the story so much more!

    Love,
    Shazia<3

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    1. Hi Shazia!

      Thank you sooo very much! I know you are dying to know what happens next, me too! But I am yet to start writing! Sorry! Amazing descriptions of the place? YOU do that very well yourself and I have told you that time and again! Yes, I too believe that details makes the story come alive. But you are just as good with that!

      Thank you! I am thinking about that and I have resolved to come to the understanding (with myself) that a published author should show up in my resume at some point. When I do that I will personally let you know, trust me! Bollywood is a part of me and will always be a part of ANYTHING I ever write! That's what makes it me along with my humour!

      Love you!

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  15. I love the names and the start was amazing. Wonderful characters!It's good to read about new characters because you don't have any expectations from them. I'm already waiting for brilliant humourous dialogues.Let you charm your way? You've always managed to do that with every story of yours. I'm so glad I know you. Never want to miss a single story written by you.
    Bright colours is what she likes! I personally love the way people dress up for MUN-ing (that's what we call it here in college).
    Loved how wrote the events taking place in both their lives in alternate paragraphs. It kept me completely engrossed. And kuch kuch hota hai? Baap re! Don't tell me you're an SRK fan?
    Eagerly waiting for the next update:)

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    1. YES, I AM A SRK FAN! To be honest of what he used to be though! Dont what he churns out nowadays! Sigh! His last movie that I loved and is actually one of my favorites is Chak De! You dont like him much I am guessing!

      OMG I loved MUN!! I was crazy about it! Thats how I knew what I wanted to do with my life! But we are/were college students and we are just looking for reasons to dress up! But in the real UN and I worked there, so dull!! I used to wear pink and yellow and orange and I would be complimented! I used to wear ALL the colorful bangles (typical Desi) and people bought them from me! True story! So that's why Naina likes her colors because I do.
      About new characters, it is so liberating! I can make them whatever and whoever I want! With having to go along with the already understood " understanding" of Arnav and Khushi! I am just as excited as you are!

      Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! To charm you has been my utmost pleasure!

      Gonna have to wait more of this update, meanwhile you have YNNA to chill with.

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  16. Love your new story! Can't wait for the main protagonists to meet and for the fireworks to start.

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  17. Amazing Sagi!!!! Maybe you can change your name to AmazingSagi :-) I logged in as New_arshifan in myeduniya account.

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    1. Hi! Hemi! Nice to know your name finally! Amazing?? Naah I was a kid when I added Charming to my name and I am a bit nostalgic about it! But Thank you for considering me amazing! Love you!

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    2. So is Sagi your real name? If I may ask?

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    3. Its Sagarika. Sagi is my pet name but I am also a Sagittarian so it works both ways!

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  18. This is fascinating. And you know what, I love it that the guy is not any percent Indian. No offense! I'll wait for this and am so glad that I have this to look forward to.

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    1. Yes! Its a story of East meets West! North meets South (above and below the equator). Thank you for your patience!

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  19. dear sagi u have charmed me with ur previous fictions.this is like another feather in ur cap. the start is interesting n i feel this is a love story.continue it ...i'll b waiting......<3

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    1. Yes. It is a love story! I have not yet ventured to other genres but if I do, it will be a comedy or a satire. Thank you so much for your kind words and patience!

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  20. Hi Charms,
    the start is mind blowing. A very promising one. Doesn't matter if the hero is Indian or Greek or Brazilian. u have simply have me hooked up with the attitude which is what counts. Thanks for starting such a novel. Can't wait for the next...............

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    1. Thank you! Hahaha! It will matter that this guy is Brazilian because Rio plays a huge role in his upbringing and how he identifies himself. Hang in there and I will try and make it worth your while!

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  21. hi charms
    you definitely charmed me my is short short update.its lovely!i'm not gonna go on but i just wanna tell you that you are fabulous writer!i laughed soooo hard or cried sooo loud for DKDD!LOVE YOUR OTHER STORIES BUT DKDD IS THE ONLY ONE THAT I'VE READ MORE THAN 3 TIMES!SO GO ON AND WEAVE YOUR SPELL!

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    1. Would you believe me when I say that I had never written anything before DKDD? And now it comes naturally to me so I am also surprised! DKDD will always be special and the Arnav from DKDD will always be the Arnav for me! You read DKDD 3 times! Wow! Thank you!

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  22. hey Charms !!!! This is shai from MED aka shaiq , i had to add that q bcoz of the compulsory 5 letters usename rule .
    Anyways here i am , created a blogger and gmail , just to read ur blog , which shows my desperation towards ur writing . :)
    as told before , i read it thrice and in parts to take in Gael and Naina and evaporate Arnav and Khushi from my mind for a while .
    I loved the starting and looking forward for our leads to meet . Hope u don't mind calling them calling ours , i know they are ur characters but as a reader thoda hak to mera bhi banta hai yaar , right ?
    I guess Gael is going to meet his dying grandomom or mom , but lets see what happens .
    All the best for future updates and update soon - i guess it is the sentence i use the most , almost everytime i comment to a writer's profile - i say update soon , i am one hungry animal for updates i tell u .
    Ok kafi bol chuki hu , now time to go .
    And plz tell me how would i know if u have updated the story or replied to my comment ? I am completely new to this , so plz help .
    See u soon
    lots of love :)

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    1. Hello Shai,
      Wow! Welcome to the Blogging world! I am touched that you would do that just for me! Thank you! It means a lot! I know it must be hard to read it without thinking of Arnav and Khushi. But I have given you Salman, Aryan and Sana and I am hoping that they have made as much an impact as have the other "borrowed" characters from the story. Give them time because believe me Naina and Gael are nothing like Arnav and Khushi! You may call them ours because they belong to you just as much as they belong to me!

      I dont know how you would know whether I have updated or commented. You would have to follow my blog and also check in now and then. Until I write YNNA, I can post a message with my updates every time I post over here.

      Love you so much and thank you!

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    2. ok so now i know what i would do in between my study breaks ! Take cell phone - open browser - stalk the blog !
      And ofcourse i love all the characters of YNNA , i used to adore Sana a lot but after knowing what she did to Aryan my craziness is lessening which in turn shows my affection towards Aryan , who is a new comer in all this beautiful mess , yet managed to create a place in our hearts .
      Dr . Salman is just wow ! I have already appreciated him a lot on Med itself .
      But my favourite is Whiskey , no offence to others . Even i love dogs , actually mine is what u can call an obsession , for dogs . So that makes him my favourite !

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    3. Hahahaha! How is the stalking going? Not much to stalk though since I am so lazy!
      Wow, I found someone who is/was a Sana fan?! Thats a new and amazing! Yes, I guess Aryan has taken over but the thing about Sana is that her problem is real and what she went through is understandable, don't you think?.

      And Whiskey is in a league of his own, clearly!

      Thank you!

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  23. waiying for ur updates sagi....its been a week dear..n happy diwali to u

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    1. Sorry you had to wait but thank you for your patience! Happy Diwali and Happy Thanksgiving to you too!

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  24. Hi Sagi,

    Beautiful update. struggling with the comment box. lets see if this works

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  25. Wonderful update! Im tagging along...cant wait till the two meet each other! Are there translations for the stuff in other languages?? And ahhh...looks like Gael has a past that sculpted him to who is now... Awesome! Keep going!Ok lets see if i can post this now. Looks like uve charmed ur way into many lives! And thank GOD! Now we don have character limits like on myedunyia! that is just so annoying! now i can type as much as i want and u will have a lot more to read! :)

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    1. I hope the note about the translation helped. But if you need any more clarification just leave a note over here! I really want you to truly enjoy this story and not feel like you are lost in translation! Not just character limits but I can use colors, fonts, pictures, videos and wow it is sooooo liberating!!! I would love to read you! Keep writing ;)

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  26. heyaa sagiii...this is aanchal from myeduniya...
    love ur blog nd story...sounds soo promising...ur characterisation of leads...the plot..storylyn..all r wonderfull...dying to see how the story will move on ahead...waiting for all of ur beautiful updates..all d bestt..!!

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    1. Hi!Thank you and I hope to keep you entertained!
      Love,
      Charms.

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  27. And ofcourse i noticed u called me shai instead of shaiq or shai c . Thanks , means a lot , i was tired of that extra q .

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  28. Wow, Charms, so they are on their way to Mumbai! And an explosive first meeting is on its way too! Both equally stubborn, strong and vocal too! I wonder if her Dadi and his Aaji are related or bosom friends! Waiting for more!!!!!!

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  29. hey charms ! I was wondering if u could atleast provide an image of Gael that u might have imagined ? It creates a havoc in my mind as whenever i imagine Gael , Barun or KSG always come to mind , don't know why ? Actually may be i have got so used to them .
    But its an injustice to Gael's character if i cannot imagine his appearance in all these updates .
    I have never seen a Brazillian guy , not even on T.V. , and i don't want any google image version of Gael , hope u understand .
    As for Naina , i have already imagined her , Indian connection u see . But even in her case , i am confused , i have imagined her like almost 20 ficticious characters and some real that i know . So if u updte her picture too then i would be calmed and my mind would be back to read the story after suffering so much confusion .

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    1. I am sorry you couldn't connect to Gael as Hrithik and Naina as Preity. To be honest a very close Brazilian friend of mine (my inspiration for Gael) is handsome (haha) and resembles Hrithik Roshan, it is quite shocking! Would you believe that? And since he is a personal friend, I dont want to put his pictures on the blog but he is very much (100%) Brazilian. However, you are welcome to look for someone you think suits the bill best. About Naina, I want you to prevent yourself from seeing her as Naina Catherine Kapoor. The only reason I named her Naina is because Gael has a thing for eyes. Eyes being the windows to our souls. Preity because Naina is supposed to have dimples. Gael does not laugh and that's all Naina does. She had to have a beautiful smile and a bubbly nature. The fact that Preity played a character named Naina and that I am using her as a character image in my story who is also named Naina is a coincidence! Sorry about that! I really want to help you but these are the images I have in my head when I am writing the story. If you want you are welcome to stick to Barun or KSG for Gael too. Its your call. The image for Leo/Davi is of a famous Brazilian soccer player who is also a model. So that's a 100% Brazilian I promise.

      If you want you can also send me the pics and I will help you alleviate your anxiety. charmingsagi@yahoo.co.in

      But for me Gael is Hrithik and Naina is Priety...

      Sorry, love. I am making it so difficult for you.

      Love,
      Charms.

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  30. Wow Charms.....this is just wonderful. I'm waiting for Gael and Naina to meet. Aamchi Mumbai welcomes all!!

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  31. There you go! I wondering how they would meet.So Mumbai it is! They call her Aaji!? I don't know why but I feel that the flight that Gael got rescheduled will be the same that Naina has to board. So some dhamakedar meeting!
    I do not like srk at all. He was good in chakde and swades.
    You worked at the UN? Wow! And they bought stuff from you! That's actually not very difficult to believe. Give another update soon:)

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    1. Mumbai it has to be! Its where I am from! Yes, since you are from Mumbai I am sure you know what Aaji means...by now you already know that of course that is the plane and of course they are going to meet each other on that plane!

      Haha, not difficult to believe because I can sweet talk anyone into doing anything I want them to...well, yeah!

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  32. Charming i was beginning to wonder wen u wil update.. jus now found it.. so UN an Indian foreign uh? sounds lik sagi in real time :P Pls put up a pic of Gael and Naina.. Barun and Sanaya are adament to take up their places and never leave my imagination.. So it gonna be meeting in Home grounds is it?? Love it and u as well:) ;)
    PS: Btw this Ambajee(chennai remember?)

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    1. Hi Ambajee,

      Well yeah...haha this time trying to portray something that I know most about. Now that you have the pics for all, does it help?

      Thank you!

      Cheers,
      Charms.

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  33. just got to know through anushree that today is your birthday .
    Wish you a very happy birthday Sagi !!!
    Wishing u all the happiness in the world . Have loads of funnnn !!!
    Miss u sooo much :(
    waiting for ur comeback !!!

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    1. Thank you so much for your wonderful wishes and kind words. It means a lot! Love you!

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  34. hi Charmingsagi, it's me Silver from MyeDuniya, your story is awesome, plus i just wanted to ask how do we make a blog, i want to write my story on a blog but i am not able to make a blog...so if you don't mind can you please tell me how to make a blog......your story is very good!! I hope that your story is a hit!!

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    1. Hi!

      Thank you!
      About the blog, click on the "blogger" tab on the very bottom and just follow the steps.

      Good Luck!

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  35. Hey!!!!!!!
    GOOD JOB!!!!
    I would like to start with congratulating you on your others stories-DKDD,KB & YNNA. I had recently chanced upon YNNA on MD & from there went on to DKDD & KB. Awesome stories. Really loved them. When I came to know that you were starting this new story on this blog, I was quite excited and was eager to read. Loved your Gael & Naina. I eagerly wait for your updates everyday. Nice work.
    I have always been a silent reader but felt that it would be a mistake from my part towards you and your work if I didn't comment and congratulate you. So here I am, just 2 days ago opened a blog account for this. Hoping to see your updates quite soon and to see more of your other work.
    MERRY CHRISTMAS & A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
    (Hope you are getting a good and well deserved break.:-))
    P.S-Belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY as well.

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    1. I am so glad that you chanced upon YNNA and then decided to give DKDD and KB a shot too...thank you!
      Also, I want to thank you, and I truly mean this, for opening up to me. Had you been a silent reader, I would have never known that I am making someone happy with my stories. So thank YOU and thank you for your kind words and best wishes. They truly mean a lot. Its messages like this that make me feel appreciated and write more. Sometimes I feel that it is okay if I update weeks later but when I read your comments I am reminded that I have a commitment to respect...love is a two way street you know...thank you for taking that extra step and opening that account here just so you could connect with me. I want you to know that it is truly appreciated.
      Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too!

      P.S. Thanks for the birthday wishes too! <3

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  36. As I always say, why do you make me fall for your males protagonists, every time a bit more? And Naina Malhotra! She is just brilliant. The way you portray the characters is spectacular! Keep going, Charms! :)

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    1. Hahahaha I guess I do it on purpose!?
      Thanks, love. <3

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  37. Fab Update. Was looking forward to it and more like it.

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  38. u know whenever i see ur replies a big smile lights up my face even before reading them , don't know why ;)
    ok i have deleted whatever i wanted to write almost thrice , as i really don't know what to write :)
    i will surely mail u whenver i find new faces for MY Gael and Naina ! Leo and Davi are perfect (handsome) !!!
    Gael has a thing for eyes ! Aha ! Did u just reveal a SECRET , which u were planning to do later on , as the story progressed ??? I LOVE MYSELF ! Now I would pester u more , so that i can extract more from u !
    Thanks for giving ur mail id , i was anyways about to ask for it . U see u evaporate in air these days , so i can't converse with u :( now i will ! Yeah !
    So how is ur break going on ? Do tell me whatever u did !

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    1. You know whenever I see YOUR replies, I start smiling too. Because, trust me, you are the most involved in my story, even proactively, if I may say so! Love you for that!

      Yes, I did reveal a secret! Darn it! I am going to have to be careful from now on especially when you are searching for more!

      I was in Las Vegas and I was touring the area all day and night. That is why I was disappearing in thin air time and again. Sorry about that. BUT I am back now.

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  39. oh i forgot to ask this . Won't u update this as chapters ? I mean its really difficult to scroll all my way down , then i realise i reached the comments so then again i have to sroll up but slowly :) it would be easy if u update this in chapters . Just a suggestion !

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    1. Yes, thank you about that. I was hesitant to do so because it goes to another tab but whatever. You can click on tabs and I can see why it would be getting difficult to scroll and find where you left off last. But not all my update will be a chapter update. Like the one for Chapter 2, thats too small for a chapter na? So I will continue the next update there. Sorry, you will have to scroll and look for where you last read at intervals...:(

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  40. Beautiful Amazing, but felt a bit short ;) i am really excited to know how the two will meet and also to know more about their lives/pasts/jobs. Please continue soon!!

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    1. Yes, short. This new one too which is on the other tab. I am working on finishing the other one so that I can pay full attention to this one. I have a complex web mapped for this one and there is no way will I be able to write any bit of it if I am dealing with the other web, YNNA that is. But that one is reaching its ultimate end so then you can move to this one because this one is much more globalized! Much more dhamakedaar!

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  41. sagi this just awesome!plz update more often and plz give longer updates!i loving every bit of it!

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    1. Thank you! I will try and do that. But I am going to first end YNNA to give full attention to this one... Hang in there :)

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  42. yesterday i was downloading languages in my phone's dictionary . I already had english and hindi and could download only 1 more . Now usually i download french , spanish or urdu but yesterday i downloaded potugese without a single thought , so i don't have to google the meaning of every word Gale speaks . It shows my excitement towards ur story and here u are testing my patience and not updating this :(
    Charms !!!! Update plzzz

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    1. Hahaha! Portuguese! Like I said, you are more involved in this story than even I am! Haha! Awesome! Sorry, sorry...I will try and be regular with this one too. Soon Gael and John are going to speak in Italian (heads up, more information for you!)

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  43. Italian ? Oh no ! Hindi delated now i would have to download Italian !
    More information for me ! Yeah ! See see my questions help me extracting information ! I am , Bond James Bond !

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  44. Hey Charms!!!
    Finally after a month i got to read your update. I used to check everyday but couldnt find any and then thru the comments i found that u had updated twice nd i was pretty frustrated & finally today Voila i somehow was able to read the update & well no denying, the wait was truly worth it. Beautiful update,Charms!!! When i read the comment abt the eyes, i was quite upset that i had no idea abt wat was happening, nd today wn i read it,my happiness knew no bounds. Gael's reaction on seeing her eyes and losing himself,"making children" & him waiting all his life for just this, was truly amazing & just perfect. Loved it!!!! Keep going, Charms!!!Waiting for ur next update!!

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    1. I know! I am sorry! See, thats why I am working on completing that story so that I can concentrate on this one. I am glad you were finally able to read it! Thank you! Please, post your email id here so I can add you on my mailing list.

      Thanks,
      Charms.

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  45. Hey!! my email id:liyahjacob@gmail.com.waiting for ur updates.tc.

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  46. I bookbookmarked ur blog long back...but u didn't update for a long time...so my interest died back...now u r back n am happy..hope u update here often..
    my email id is Rasy.frjns@gmail.com

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    1. Hi, I am sorry you had to wait but since I am working on two stories and currently in my final year here in College, it got a bit hectic. It might get hectic again and so I dont intend on churning out an update daily but I will try and be more frequent only after I have concluded the story on myeduniya. Thanks for the email. I will keep you posted.

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  47. and so far I can c only two updates. ..d last one with pics. ..
    I mean dey r on d way to airport na...bcs I can c only comments after dat...n u said n MD dat u updated here. .but now seeing. ..

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    1. Go to the tab on the top right hand corner of the page. Click on 2013 and it will show you the Chapter 2 tab. For future reference, use the same. Because I will be uploading the story in individual chapters.

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  48. please mail me the next time u update...i love this story! it's navnu_navna @yahoo.ca

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  49. hey charms... have been an avid reader of all your stories on MeD.. and the're great.you truly have a flair for writing.
    Would love to read this story to the end,my email id.:
    anisah_p@hotmail.co.uk

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  50. Hey,

    There's only 2 chapters right? I've only read 2 but I feel as if I missed one of them. :P Anyways, I just wanted to say that it was really, really, really amazing like my eyes fill with tears when I read your stories(not because the update or chapter is sad but because it's so wonderful, it's just so full of life!! I know that you've given pictures for the characters but I hope you dont mind me imagining them as different people :] I hope to read the next update very soon!! I know you're very busy but I'm dying to read the next update! I know the story has barely started but all the foreshadowing and characters are so intriguing that I can never get enough of this story!

    With Love,

    Shazia

    PS: shaziakhanvirman@hotmail.com

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    1. Hi Shazia,

      All the chapters will be on the blog archives in case you feel like you are missing something. Thank you so much! Like I have said before you words truly mean the word to me and I am glad that I am able to have a consistent effect like that on you! I dont mind who you imagine. I am happy that you are willing to make this story personal and I only hope that you enjoy it to the maximum.

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